2011-05-10

Freewrite for May 9-13

So here are your prompts for the first week of free-write:

1. If I were a butterfly...

2. At ten o'clock last night...

3. The first time I...

4. Today for lunch...

5. Lolita means to me...

6 comments:

  1. 1) If I were a butterfly... I could have many colors and design on my wings, rather than just a plain one color.
    2)At ten o'clock last night... I was doing my homework, but it was pushed till 11 o'clock because I was procrastinating.
    3)The first time I... rode my bike was when I was in 5th grade.
    4)Today for lunch... I ate fried rice and watched my friend spent an hour just to eat a small pack lunch.
    5)Lolita means to me... as this small girl that was harassed and life was taken away by the cruelty of humans.

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  2. 1. If I were a butterfly, I would have flown to the most beautiful flower to take a rest on it and have some nice honey.
    2. At ten o'clock last night, I was probably sleeping or something because it was tiring yesterday.
    3. The first time I saw Layla, the most desirable wish I had was being a friend of hers.
    4. Today for lunch, I had kimbab that my mom made; she likes to make kimbab for my lunch these days.
    5. Lolita means to me a pathetic young girl whose life was destroyed by an ignorant dumb man.

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  3. Irfan, I totally wish that I have wings that have many colors and designs on them. Wouldn't it be so nice if I have that kind of big, beautiful wings to fly to the sky and sit on a tree or something? I still imagine myself being a fairy who can fly so far away and it is just so wonderful even though it is only imagenary!

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  4. Remember what the website says. For each of these prompts you need to spend 10 minutes writing. It is not just a simple sentence. Be expressive and tell me what you want me to know.

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  5. If I were a butterfly...
    If I were a butterfly, I will firstly go to a place where no one is. Since butterfly is weak, I don’t want humans to kill me.
    Butterfly is one of the most beautiful insects in this world. There fore, if I were a butterfly, I would like to have ravishing wings. Also, I would like to drink the most delicious nectar in this universe.

    2. At ten o'clock last night...
    To say the truth, I was sleeping at ten o’clock last night. Since I came back from the school at 7 pm, I was so tired that, as soon as I was home, I slept until 10:30.
    What I think is that, “sleeping” is the most important and enjoyable action. There fore, students need more time to sleep.

    3. The first time I...
    The first time I went to HIS, I was really nervous. I remember Remon was like a little boy because of her short hair. When I talked to her, she only spoke English, and so, we couldn’t talk that much until we became 2nd grade.
    Lots of people had changed through out their elementary year except for Seiya. I’m quite sure that when Seiya was in 1st grade, he was like the way he is right now.

    4. Today for lunch...
    Today, I had a rice ball for lunch. I think rice ball is the easiest lunch to make. Although there are varieties of rice balls, they are all cheap. There fore I think we should respect rice ball.
    Now that I’m talking about a rice ball, I wonder who invented this wonderful food. Any way, I had a great lunch time.

    5. Lolita means to me..
    Lolita means “a poor little girl who is sexually abused by an old man” for me. I can’t imagine I’m falling in love with an old man! In the book, Reading Lolita In Tehran, it shows the tenderness of Lolita. Although she is a small girl, she doesn’t have a right to express her feeling, and all she can do is to run away.

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  6. Irfan- I like your thought about Lolita. In fact, I have a totally same thought. Lolita is a poor little girl who doesn't have any rights to live her own life. I mean, I can't believe how she is sexually abused by an old man.

    Jae Ok- I agree with your article about "if I were a butterfly".
    How romantic it is to rest on a beautiful flower, and having a delicious meal. I can imagine you're enjoying and flying with beautiful wings. :]

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